I am very glad that it worked. I wasn't so sure about the change, but after a year or more, the small adjustmens made all the difference for me in terms of what the finished product should look like. So, now, done!
And I do agree that it's maybe a little on the abbreviated/abrupt side. Maybe because of the formatting? It's like snapshots of the same moment but there isn't a traditional sense of plot or story arc; there's no real progression. Maybe that's what it is.
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Date: 2007-01-08 04:53 pm (UTC)From:And I do agree that it's maybe a little on the abbreviated/abrupt side. Maybe because of the formatting? It's like snapshots of the same moment but there isn't a traditional sense of plot or story arc; there's no real progression. Maybe that's what it is.