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seraphcelene ([personal profile] seraphcelene) wrote2008-06-17 12:13 am

Drabble: Col Arco (with the bow) - BtVS, B/A

Title: Col Arco (with the bow)
Author: seraphcelene
Rating: PG-13ish (barely around the edges)
A/N: pre-Innocence B/A for the bow challenge at open on sunday. x-posted.
Summary: Buffy and Angel, playing close to the bridge.

Angel plays Buffy tight, he's always known how. Draws the sound of her pleasure, like a song, from her heart. It's the mingled echo of heartbreak and sharp knives, roaring apocalypse at the world's end.

His nipping mouth swallows her gasps for safety. A promise and a warning.

Angel saws against her, jean clad thigh wedged high and tight between her legs. Presses up with his knee and then tilts his pelvis down. Kisses the spot behind her ear, and shivers as her kitten voice breaks with orgasm, sweet legato drawn by the desperate press of his body on hers.

[identity profile] late-heart.livejournal.com 2008-06-17 03:06 pm (UTC)(link)
It's the mingled echo of heartbreak and sharp knives, roaring apocalypse at the world's end. What an incredible description of what he does to her.

Angel saws against her...

Feeling faint now.

But seriously, your words are so melodic, so beautifully assembled without a note wasted. Eroticism and agony and I really am feeling faint.

Brava!!

*melts off the chair*

[identity profile] lettered.livejournal.com 2008-06-17 03:55 pm (UTC)(link)
OMG. This is brilliant. And hot. And brilliant. Every word is sharp, precise, perfect. Thanks so much.

[identity profile] diachrony.livejournal.com 2008-06-17 06:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh my.

It's incredibly erotic and incredibly gorgeous.

[identity profile] ares132006.livejournal.com 2011-10-11 04:32 am (UTC)(link)
This is a song of love and yearning and heartbreak. Very erotic. PG13? Heh! :)

Ares